Or at least one but not bothanonymous readerReport 2012-09-30 20:51:06It’s a good story, although I agree with the first comment it is a bit fast paced and a bit more detail would be good.«12» Or at least one but not bothanonymous readerReport 2012-09-30 20:51:06It’s a good story, although I agree with the first comment it is a bit fast paced and a bit more detail would be good.«12» I read them both because I hve nothing to do!anonymous readerReport 2012-09-30 22:13:41At first I thought it was a coincidence, but them I realized where the names were from. U should think of original ones. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-10-12 23:29:54Mortal Instruments charactersKittencat3Report 2012-10-04 05:18:51This looks like the sort of story that a 14-year-old who hasn’t had any sexual experiences other than her hairbrush jammed up her snatch would write.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-03 23:06:56It was great and so was the other one with more details.
