1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-07 00:24:59there are some minor gramtical errors, but the stiry and plot are very good. 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-07 00:24:59there are some minor gramtical errors, but the stiry and plot are very good. The only thing I might suggest is a little more background on the characters«1» The only thing I might suggest is a little more background on the characters«1» The only thing I might suggest is a little more background on the characters«1» 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-07 00:24:59there are some minor gramtical errors, but the stiry and plot are very good. 1 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2012-07-07 00:24:59there are some minor gramtical errors, but the stiry and plot are very good. The only thing I might suggest is a little more background on the characters«1» The only thing I might suggest is a little more background on the characters«1» The only thing I might suggest is a little more background on the characters«1» The only thing I might suggest is a little more background on the characters«1»
