it has potential to be good. Ex. Also, a factual problem which is somewhat off putting and severely challenges the credibility of your story. it has potential to be good. Ex. it has potential to be good. i’m waiting to see how your writing develops.«12» I wish you luck in your future attempts at writing :)anonymous readerReport 2012-08-21 20:56:58no begining a rush to sex and no end equal a WASTE OF TIME do a total rewrite and use a good editor.chance52Report 2012-07-10 18:52:17much like everyone else said, you’re story does need some build up to it. But it’s a nice try. also, a character description lets people picture your story more vividly. Ex. Also, a factual problem which is somewhat off putting and severely challenges the credibility of your story.
