8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-26 09:22:49So you get turned on (mildly) by:
1 the fact she is fit – WTF? But NOT by:
3 the fact that her husband is present, goading her – triple WTF? 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2016-12-26 09:22:49So you get turned on (mildly) by:
1 the fact she is fit – WTF? granted, i do have a fair bit, but im just wide.cajunReport 2009-08-06 07:51:21Put a chapter 2 to it and give more details and then you may have something going. But NOT by:
3 the fact that her husband is present, goading her – triple WTF? I suggest you write by planning story using a story board to outline the flow, then filling in sections, finally editing for consistency, grammar and spelling
1/10 for story, + 2/10 for potential, + 1/10 for your audacity to publishJAMES ROTHERYReport 2011-06-06 17:09:40fucking shit this story is not incest its fucking lameAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-16 01:20:18i dont get it is this a joke. ive 6’5 and im about 280 lbs. I suggest you write by planning story using a story board to outline the flow, then filling in sections,
