Great story, sequel pleaseAnonymous readerReport 2009-03-02 23:57:22sequel plz thats all i have to sayAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-06 15:53:20dude this was a very good story you could of went to a little more detail but still good try and build up a story frist dont just go right into it have them make looks across the dinner table in front of there parents and i liked how she just up and left added suspence
10 out of 10READERReport 2008-04-05 16:27:36It def has to be real and they should do it again. Are you like 12 or something???? this time with a little role reversal.«12345» Great story, sequel pleaseAnonymous readerReport 2009-03-02 23:57:22sequel plz thats all i have to sayAnonymous readerReport 2008-06-06 15:53:20dude this was a very good story you could of went to a little more detail but still good try and build up a story frist dont just go right into it have them make looks across the dinner table in front of there parents and i liked how she just up and left added suspence
10 out of 10READERReport 2008-04-05 16:27:36It def has to be real
