Part 1 of this story is good. Just don’t rush it. That is a difficult thing to do with this crowd. You are building this up slow and steady, yet fast enough to keep most enticed. You are building this up slow and steady, yet fast enough to keep most enticed. That is a difficult thing to do with this crowd. Just don’t rush it. 21 comments«12345»fuckorsexReport 2015-11-03 17:57:01nice one .,its comingAnonymous readerReport 2014-08-15 00:32:14Read Senior Year by this writer and loved it so am reading the rest of his stories. You are building this up slow and steady, yet fast enough to keep most enticed. That is a difficult thing to do with this crowd. It has a slow natural buildup, which is rare for stories on here.Anonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:58love the stories keep them commingAnonymous readerReport 2014-02-12 04:58:56love the stories keep them comminganonymous readerReport 2013-06-04 20:26:20Great start to what should turn out to be an excellent story.
