Finally to the anonymous poster on 2009-11-10 1:27:29:: We’ve all got issues, hon. Also, my comments about the author’s gender were out of line, as it has nothing to do with the story. I’d like to be perfectly honest and say that, it upset me that the comment left by the other reader was mostly complaining about little technical things, and that they were actually wrong about most of them. I was grumpy when I read yours, and it irked me. I re-read the story, and did find where the jock thinks to himself that he’s falling for this girl. My own experience is that I don’t fall in love until the third time with sex.dwduckReport 2009-11-21 10:52:43Thank you. You clearly have a talent for writing; keep with it. Still, the commenter you were blasting, dwduck, made some valid points – and you addressed them. Don’t let opinions dissuade you from writing whatever, and however, the inspiration strikes you. I apologize for shooting my keyboard off without knowing what I was typing about. Frankly, I didn’t read your
