2 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2013-09-15 01:31:23If this has been edited I am certainly happy that I did not try to read the previous version. If you are going to write, learn about what constitutes good writing. PLEASE learn how to proofread you stuff BEFORE dumping onto this site. If you are going to write, learn about what constitutes good writing. If is NOT just a bunch of printed words. PLEASE learn how to proofread you stuff BEFORE dumping onto this site. You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before. You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before. This is full of misspelled words and incorrect grammar. If you cannot proofread, find someone (who is literate) to do it for you. You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before. You even misspelled “collage(sic)” and “sus(sic)” among many others.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-14 20:38:39Much better than the one before.
