Jewelz Blu And Owen Gray’s Intimate Encounter Concludes With A Creampie

Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school before attempting to write.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:18:57Very good story! As I said before – good, creative story. Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school before attempting to write.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:18:57Very good story! This needs a lot of work before it is readable.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-29 01:05:57Hmmm… You left some great possibilities open for a second chapter. I have two suggestions. You left some great possibilities open for a second chapter. grammar was atrocious. First, run your story past one of the volunteer editors to refine the grammar, spelling and punctuation. Formatting was also terrible. Thanks for committing your time and effort to the art of writing and keep writing!anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:38:55Yeah, maybe actually finish primary school before attempting to write.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-28 20:18:57Very good story! This needs a lot of work before it is readable.anonymous readerReport 2013-09-29 01:05:57Hmmm…