Give it up….u DONT write well, there was NOTHING sexy or hot abt this story…just….stop writing….OR I if u insist on continuing – LEARN HOW TO WRITE BETTER & USE FUCKING SPELL/GRAMMAR CHECK!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-04 17:46:51Leave it; he’ll understand??! 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-10-29 00:35:24PLEASE…..STOP…..WRITING!!!!!!! Take spelling!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 01:51:14This was fvckin stupid! 8 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2011-10-29 00:35:24PLEASE…..STOP…..WRITING!!!!!!! Give it up….u DONT write well, there was NOTHING sexy or hot abt this story…just….stop writing….OR I if u insist on continuing – LEARN HOW TO WRITE BETTER & USE FUCKING SPELL/GRAMMAR CHECK!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-04 17:46:51Leave it; he’ll understand??! This was pathetic! Please don’t continue«12» Take spelling!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 01:51:14This was fvckin stupid! Give it up….u DONT write well, there was NOTHING sexy or hot abt this story…just….stop writing….OR I if u insist on continuing – LEARN HOW TO WRITE BETTER & USE FUCKING SPELL/GRAMMAR CHECK!!Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-04 17:46:51Leave it; he’ll understand??! Try using spell check, a dictionary, and some proper grammerAnonymous readerReport 2010-03-29 11:03:21Shannon…go back to school….or…are you still in school??
