Your character should’ve had HIS salad tossed in addition to pissing in both of her holes as well. I think since the story had a “kinky” tone you should’ve have had more details. You could also have described what her pussy, asshole, and pee smelled like. Hope you see this and decide to write some additional stories using the same theme and activities you included in this story. way to stupid, why would he want anything to do with her since she abandoned him for the geek? way to stupid, why would he want anything to do with her since she abandoned him for the geek? seem more likely that he would ignore and avoid her at all costs, KEEP IT AT LEAST SOME WHAT BELIEVABLE PLEASEanonymous readerReport 2013-01-05 06:34:03One question in paragraph 20 or something it says “No one has ever fucked me there” so how many people has she been fucked by???Anonymous readerReport 2010-07-23 16:15:36strange she set restrictions on what they could do as kids but now wants to show him what her nerdy boyfriend taught her
