Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? You simply need to work on delivering what you relate in a more legible manner.Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-14 17:37:13You’re a very talented writer, and I understand that it must be damn hard to write about something like that. Just need more practice, I suppose.SwingerReport 2009-09-03 15:53:36Story horny but paragraphs needed. But, you are a very talented writer. Or are you now over them? Or are you now over them? 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-23 09:29:18Pretty poor writing with horrible grammar, spelling, and syntax, and a lack of sentence structure and any semblance of paragraphs, proper punctuation and dialog. 4 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-04-23 09:29:18Pretty poor writing with horrible grammar, spelling, and syntax, and a lack of sentence structure and any semblance of paragraphs, proper punctuation and dialog. Do you wank off about those great days, greenhornet144? Would like to hear further adventures. Work on your grammar, sentence structure, and plot. thank you.jakthemessiahReport 2009-08-18 21:41:42Dude…
