5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-05-22 02:21:36Wow, some of the more painful writing I’ve muddled through. {intentional words} I joust love when the word is spelled write, butt utterly the rung won to use their.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-14 23:07:37kinda harsh Ghostrider939… to the author i would advise reading over what you write and making sure it sounds right and try to add more to the sex… but i get what you mean… 5 comments«1»anonymous readerReport 2011-05-22 02:21:36Wow, some of the more painful writing I’ve muddled through. The story has potential, but the spelling, grammar, and technical details were horrendous and ought to be checked before publishing.anonymous readerReport 2011-05-12 10:28:23IJWTS wow! drag it out more. Add more details or have coach get some treatment for premature ejaculation.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-15 01:35:22{adding…} “read it over” with a fine-toothed spell-checker, as well as a good grammar-checker. it has potential«1» Add more details or have coach get some treatment for premature ejaculation.anonymous readerReport 2011-04-15 01:35:22{adding…} “read it over” with a fine-toothed spell-checker, as well as a good grammar-checker.
