It makes this story believable. 4 comments«1»READERReport 2007-05-09 19:19:30Cheers guy, good to get some feeedback, i willl be writing some more of our stories soon.READERReport 2007-05-05 19:32:26Reader of 5/5–You misread the info, he is 12 years older than Steph. any more adventures you write about would be greatly appreciated. I misread it at first. The story is great and it is different from anything that I have read. 7/10
thanxREADERReport 2007-05-05 00:15:52The one thing I noticed, 2nd paragraph, he shouldn’t be 12 should he? I misread it at first. I’m thinking he’s 21 and you reversed the letters, well written story otherwise.«1» 4 comments«1»READERReport 2007-05-09 19:19:30Cheers guy, good to get some feeedback, i willl be writing some more of our stories soon.READERReport 2007-05-05 19:32:26Reader of 5/5–You misread the info, he is 12 years older than Steph.
