China Mimura’s Intimate Japanese Allure In Uncensored Scenes

I’m not bagging on you, I’m just saying you’ve got a lot to work on. 🙂 I liked it, it is rushed.anonymous readerReport 2013-03-29 14:32:38I really didn’t care for the ‘Rose’ character in this story. I’m not bagging on you, I’m just saying you’ve got a lot to work on. 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-04 21:09:15Lol, I was the first to read this cause the author is mah buddy. No offense. Finally, if you are going to write a sex story, or any story for that matter, make the theme, in this case, the actual sex, take up more than 4 paragraphs. 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-04 21:09:15Lol, I was the first to read this cause the author is mah buddy. 12 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2013-04-04 21:09:15Lol, I was the first to read this cause the author is mah buddy. Next, never write something cliche like `Enough about me`, especially when you have barely written a paragraph about the character.