to honest it was decently good but needs more work. to honest it was decently good but needs more work. JMHOLil DemonReport 2009-04-02 06:38:11Your heart was deffintly there .. to honest it was decently good but needs more work. 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 20:35:03nice story but u got to concentrate more on grammar and spellinganonymous readerReport 2011-05-12 16:43:00You’re the getraset! Keep tryingREADERReport 2007-01-31 17:12:26tht it was quite goodREADERReport 2005-11-23 14:52:56most sucking story ever«123» Keep tryingREADERReport 2007-01-31 17:12:26tht it was quite goodREADERReport 2005-11-23 14:52:56most sucking story ever«123» to honest it was decently good but needs more work. JMHOLil DemonReport 2009-04-02 06:38:11Your heart was deffintly there .. JMHOLil DemonReport 2009-04-02 06:38:11Your heart was deffintly there .. Keep tryingREADERReport 2007-01-31 17:12:26tht it was quite goodREADERReport 2005-11-23 14:52:56most sucking story ever«123» 11 comments«123»anonymous readerReport 2011-09-18 20:35:03nice story but u got to concentrate more on grammar and spellinganonymous readerReport 2011-05-12 16:43:00You’re the getraset! Keep tryingREADERReport 2007-01-31 17:12:26tht it was quite goodREADERReport 2005-11-23 14:52:56most sucking story ever«123» JMHOLil DemonReport 2009-04-02 06:38:11Your heart was deffintly there ..
