Story flow is a slow, but U’re juggling 3 different locations in the nation plus 2 different times in history without loosing or confusing the reader. Much obliged.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 15:47:24U still want to cruise? My cousin Gary and bob are cruising overkummbuketReport 2012-11-24 10:08:03whoa like the father pissed on his daughter and in her cunthole. Story flow is a slow, but U’re juggling 3 different locations in the nation plus 2 different times in history without loosing or confusing the reader. Damn i gushed all over my fingers i need to start trying this stuff!!!snapperboxReport 2012-08-19 01:44:13best part was the daddy and daughter in the bathroom and him pissing all over her. Seven yr later, my comments & suggestions are moot. Awesome feat. In addition to keeping the attention of girls & boys alike. At least now I can vote. At least now I can vote. In addition to keeping the attention of girls & boys alike. Damn i gushed all over my fingers i need to start trying this stuff!!!snapperboxReport 2012-08-19 01:44:13best part was the daddy and daughter in
