the changing tenses, and viewpoint. 10/10READERReport 2005-05-16 02:49:4010/10READERReport 2005-05-06 20:01:38I am sorry about the tense changes and spelling. Thanks for all the advice and be well.READERReport 2005-05-06 13:39:22Not a bad story idea, that said, it needs work esp. I thought you did a great job keep up the good work! If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it. Thanks for all the advice and be well.READERReport 2005-05-06 13:39:22Not a bad story idea, that said, it needs work esp. I love reading incest/sex. I found the grammar checker on my program I write in and kept the point of view to one person. Thanks for all the advice and be well.READERReport 2005-05-06 13:39:22Not a bad story idea, that said, it needs work esp. If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it. RREADERReport 2005-05-06 13:36:56that story was so hard 2 finish
try again
3/10«123» If the story happens to you leave it there, If you’re an observer, stay with it.
