I really liked it. I could feel the sparks between them. I really liked it. This submission dominates, Traci.READERReport 2005-05-07 19:19:49love this story, it made me cum.«12» I might recommend slowing down while writing and having someone proof read… Damn she lost her innocents but you gave no details… I might recommend slowing down while writing and having someone proof read… 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-28 20:27:27Good story but poor grammar does subtract from the flow in reading… I might recommend slowing down while writing and having someone proof read… I’m sure she must have had emotions about it after while alone in her room…READERReport 2006-06-12 21:57:19reading them in order like this series…READERReport 2006-03-09 23:45:08not a bad read. 6 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2014-04-28 20:27:27Good story but poor grammar does subtract from the flow in reading… I might recommend slowing down while writing and having someone proof read…
