Hell, everyone’s story is a complex arrangement and re-arrangement of dreams, desires, actions/reactions, and even retributions. Stop for a bit and do the ideas, sketch, develop, write, REVIEW system of developing a complex story. Hell, everyone’s story is a complex arrangement and re-arrangement of dreams, desires, actions/reactions, and even retributions. It appears you have too many avenues in your mind that you could take this story and want to follow them all. 19 comments«1234»Anonymous readerReport 2016-10-25 11:29:30Dinner Occasion denizens raise your voice construct y really want his or her area back once again.Anonymous readerReport 2015-12-22 01:05:18I agree absolutely with previous comments. The first 2 had some flow, but the last 2 were totally disjointed. Keep the stories coming, just take the time to ensure continuity isn’t destroyed.Bry83Report 2015-09-11 22:09:42These were all good stories but the problem is the confusion of it all for a first time though it is a bit of a easy mistake to make it would be nice to see the series redone to where everyone understands it all & also continue the series.Anonymous readerReport 2015-02-03 01:55:14if these
