What do they do when they aren’t having sex with each other? When does this story take place? And why are they attracted to each other. Where do they live? and lastly, and I got this on my own story as a comment, read your own story out loud to catch some of the mistakes. How did they meet? Let me if I may, give some constructive critisism? What do they do when they aren’t having sex with each other? and if people can’t bother to sign in ,then their comments should not be taken to heart.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-13 02:28:11ok, I liked the story. 🙂 now… and lastly, and I got this on my own story as a comment, read your own story out loud to catch some of the mistakes. When does this story take place? Where do they live? And why are they attracted to each other. Doing so adds to the atmosphere, adds background and detail that makes a story interesting and not just a clinical description of some random people having sex.anonymous readerReport 2012-06-13 04:55:08not
