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See? Accordingly, unless you’re going for some weird avant-garde effect it’s best to stick to writing from just one character’s point of view (POV) at a time. Bye for now,
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    It’s just something to think about. I think the following checklist provides a good starting point for critiquing any unit of writing you’re examining:
Can it be clearer? It’s a truism that as soon as you publish something you will immediately see a glaring error, and that goes double when you write something that, by its nature, will provoke gleeful joy from anyone who spots such an error and gets to point it out. Of course what I meant in this case is that Elizabeth slipped Karen’s hand into Karen’s pussy, but in other cases it might not be so obvious.Tenses
Stories are usually written in the past tense, which means you’re limited to the past perfect tense if you want to use tenses