Has therefore to be a negative rating regardless of the unread contents
WWanonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 06:07:28It was good just to me it seemed like one big whole sentence. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-19 00:25:47Please if you are going to write a story, use paragraphs, punctuation and proper English. (:«12» (:«12» I know you made sentences it was just all smushed together like that it looks like one big sentence. And adding more details to make it longer would also help. Has therefore to be a negative rating regardless of the unread contents
WWanonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 06:07:28It was good just to me it seemed like one big whole sentence. 7 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2012-08-19 00:25:47Please if you are going to write a story, use paragraphs, punctuation and proper English. Other than that, it was a pretty good story.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 23:03:23It was all one big sentence and If I wanted to read crap, I would read a stupid comic.anonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 16:11:59another load of infantile illiterate crapanonymous readerReport 2012-08-18 06:21:31A single block of text !!
