1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-12 13:31:40Keep going. 1 comments«1»Anonymous readerReport 2009-09-12 13:31:40Keep going. Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. I’d suggest avoiding present tense, though. Past tense works a lot better for stories this long.«1» There’s much more you can do with/to this girl. There’s much more you can do with/to this girl.
