A second chapter (and more, if you choose to write them) would be welcome.Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-06 15:58:44Nice story. Write another!62merlinReport 2008-09-04 11:11:25needs to be a part 2!!!Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-04 02:56:14great storyAnonymous readerReport 2008-09-03 14:57:06unusual…«12» A second chapter (and more, if you choose to write them) would be welcome.Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-06 15:58:44Nice story. A second chapter (and more, if you choose to write them) would be welcome.Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-06 15:58:44Nice story. Carol’s role makes me doubt it. A second chapter (and more, if you choose to write them) would be welcome.Anonymous readerReport 2008-09-06 15:58:44Nice story. 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-07-03 03:23:36Seems like it could be a true story, although Ms. Your style is different from other writers’ styles, and I appreciate that. It is different than other things I have read on here…it’s always nice to have a change!
