2 comments«1»lifeslayer696Report 2011-07-18 08:20:23The idea is really good!!! But, as the other guy said, you shoud put more description in it… Just barely 5000 words. Put in more descriptions.«1» Just barely 5000 words. Just barely 5000 words. Put in more descriptions.«1» Just barely 5000 words. 2 comments«1»lifeslayer696Report 2011-07-18 08:20:23The idea is really good!!! Keep writing though…anonymous readerReport 2011-07-14 23:43:26Too short. But, as the other guy said, you shoud put more description in it… 2 comments«1»lifeslayer696Report 2011-07-18 08:20:23The idea is really good!!! Keep writing though…anonymous readerReport 2011-07-14 23:43:26Too short. 2 comments«1»lifeslayer696Report 2011-07-18 08:20:23The idea is really good!!! Just barely 5000 words. 2 comments«1»lifeslayer696Report 2011-07-18 08:20:23The idea is really good!!! 2 comments«1»lifeslayer696Report 2011-07-18 08:20:23The idea is really good!!! Put in more descriptions.«1» 2 comments«1»lifeslayer696Report 2011-07-18 08:20:23The idea is really good!!! 2 comments«1»lifeslayer696Report 2011-07-18 08:20:23The idea is really good!!!
